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[pokemonfan58]

This is basically a request from gawge I believe! In other news I wasn't able to post Episode 3 yesterday because I was having problems with the internet browser not responding! So enjoy Episode 3 of my latest written story Jolteon Hero of Today Master of Electricity!

Andrew The Jolteon: ................

????: Wake up! Wake uuuuuuupppp!!!!

Andrew The Jolteon: Huh? Wait wth?

????: The carnival!

Andrew The Jolteon: What about it??? Who are you??

????: Theres no tiiiimmmeeee for that!!! There's gonna be a major disaster!!

Andrew The Jolteon: What do you mean?

????: The Ferris Wheel the High up Ferris Wheel..... The Power..... The Ferris wheel will cause a major disaster to beach city!

Andrew The Jolteon: What wait don't go I!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Andrew The Jolteon: Huh? Oh oh just a dream.... But that guy in my dreams was telling me about a disaster at the carnival.. I better go there!!

Later at the Beach city carnival!

Andrew The Jolteon: Hmmmmm.

Boss: Ok the bombs are all set sir!

????: Good. Just make sure that Jolteon freak doesn't get here!

Boss: Alright!

Andrew The Jolteon: Huh!? Boss!!!!

Andrew The Jolteon: Its ends here Boss!! Huh? What the your a flareon! What the?

Boss: I know.. but the danger is about to begin! I set up the bombs inside the Ferris wheel! Now your all screwed!!!

Andrew The Jolteon: OHHH GOD ITS ABOUT TO EXPLODE!!!!

*Andrew escapes*

*Ferris wheel starts to break!*

Andrew The Jolteon: Ohhhh god! EVERYONE EVACUATE THE AREA NOW!!!!!!

*People screams*

Boss: Its not over!

Andrew The Jolteon: Oh yeah! Take this for what you done!!

*Boss avoids Andrew's attack*

Andrew The Jolteon: Huh?

Boss: Too pathetic! How about this!!!

Andrew The Jolteon: Ahhhhh!!! ........ Your going down!!!!

*Andrew uses thunder*

Boss: OH WHAT THE!!!!!

*Boss gets hurt real bad*

Boss: Ahh danmit!

Andrew The Jolteon: Grrrrrrrrrrrr.....

Boss: Ha!

*Boss runs away*

Andrew The Jolteon: Hmmmmm...

Some Little Girl: HELP!!!

Andrew The Jolteon: DON'T WORRY I WILL SAVE YOU!!!!

*Andrew saves the little girl*

*Crowd cheers*

Crowd: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY!!!! YOU ROCK JOLTEON!!!!!

Andrew The Jolteon: Thank you thank you!

News 8: It appears a little girl was about to get hit by the ferris wheel but all of a sudden this mysterious creature known as Jolteon saved the little girl! Now people have been saying about him that he is known as Jolteon Hero of Today Master of Electricity! But how did this pokemon manage to come to the real world? Everyone has been wandering!

Andrew's mom: Oh my god!

????: So that lil brat is making a title for himself!

Boss: Sir do you think the people who hates pokemon are gonna try to stop him?

????: How do I know? Hehe! Well if they are one thing for sure is they are gonna be on our side!

TO BE CONTINUED!

[Gawge]

OMG! Amazing!

I knew you wouldn't let me down.

[jungleboyfruit]

Pretty cool, I'm glad you didn't listen to that elfin.

[Dannehkins]

How could you betray bellsprout like that (or whoever you were before , poliwag maybe)

[Spotter5]

BRILLIANT

[dannyjt]

Why do you never put in any narration too your stories?

[jungleboyfruit]

It's a screen play, silly.

[dannyjt]

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jungleboyfruit wrote:
It's a screen play, silly.

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Even screen plays require some scene setting and narration.

[jungleboyfruit]

I was in HMV once and saw the Donnie Darko book for £3 so I got it. I thought it was going to be a proper story but it's basically just the screenplay with some other bits, I've still not read it.

[IrelandSniper]

What is this?