on 26-12-2011 12:31 AM
Hi,
This is an improvement on my old track: The Frost. Like always, feedback is wanted!
In 2043, Modnation bought the rights to host a race to a town near Interlaken, Switzerland, called Schneevil. This town has typical thin European Roads, covered in snow, with a double black ski run at the end (moguls right at the end too!). While you speed through the town, keep your eyes peeled for all 3 alternate routes and 1 shortcut to try to find the shortest route! Throw in the chance to get 6 item pods in 1 lap and you've got one hell of a race! Now, without further ado, I present...
Schneevil Rally:
on 05-01-2012 11:05 AM
No one.
Please if someone could give me some feedback, it would really help me to improve.
on 05-01-2012 05:08 PM
Welcome to my world! Everyone says it looks cool and will try it, but no feedback until I actually get in a race with someone and ask for it. (Usually the people I try to ask I don't know and they say "It's waaaaay to haaaard"... it usually is a little hard, but they can't handle it!)
So don't worry if people ignore your track or if you don't get feedback all the time. I mean if I got like that I would just bump up my Oasis City River Run! LOL but I do not. So don't worry. I guess if nobody gives you feedback that means nobody really liked it and that gives you more than enough feedback to improve! just kidding, again LOL... but still improve just because... pony. Just do it. I don't know what I'm saying anymore.
on 05-01-2012 05:23 PM
The_Pwner007 wrote:Welcome to my world! Everyone says it looks cool and will try it, but no feedback until I actually get in a race with someone and ask for it. (Usually the people I try to ask I don't know and they say "It's waaaaay to haaaard"... it usually is a little hard, but they can't handle it!)
So don't worry if people ignore your track or if you don't get feedback all the time. I mean if I got like that I would just bump up my Oasis City River Run! LOL but I do not. So don't worry. I guess if nobody gives you feedback that means nobody really liked it and that gives you more than enough feedback to improve! just kidding, again LOL... but still improve just because... pony. Just do it. I don't know what I'm saying anymore.
Yeah, thanks pwner, I just don't get it why everyone gives atheistsw feedback, when frankly, he doesn't need it, but they never give new people feedback. Go figure! I ask people for tips and less than half respond. I realise that my tracks are not ase interesting as ath's, but that's partly because I don't get feedback! As I'm on vacation at the moment, I'm planning some killer tracks (as in drawing them out in detail). I have planned 4, and when I get back in a couple of weeks, I hope to get a track on hot lap. Maybe then I will get some feedback!
Also, I get so few downloads.
At least Jungrila Rush! has more than 50 downloads, my best track, even though it was published less than a month ago, only has 4 downloads and this track has got me a grand total of 0 exp. 0, 0... My dream is to get into hot lap, someday soon, so I get some exp and people realise that I make decent tracks. but it doesn't happen...
Off topic, maybe we could do a team track and submit it on hot lap, see if we get in. We have similar creation styles, so we should be able to work well together. But not until I get back in 2 weeks, unless you want to plan...
on 05-01-2012 06:19 PM
LOL'd at 2 things:
"but they never give new people feedback. Go figure!"
I don't get much feedback (good ones only come from the forum or people I know), and I been in this for more than a year. Go veterans! lol but then again, I know I can step up my game, creating-wise at least.
"Also, I get so few downloads. At least Junglira Rush! has more than 50 downloads..."
Wait, WT****? It does? Last time I saw it, it had around 30.... The only thing that I saw that was close to 50 dl's was my Drag Race 500 which my friend made on my account (he doesn't have ModNation). It was just a straiglt up and down loop and has the most dl's of any of my tracks... yeah noobs. I don't get them either, downloading my crap, not my actual work. Well it is the easiest!
And about the team track thing.... maybe. I tried to do one with dane, but didn't get to and I'm still thinking about doing one with him now that the Holiday competition is over.
on 05-01-2012 09:21 PM
The_Pwner007 wrote:LOL'd at 2 things:
"but they never give new people feedback. Go figure!"
I don't get much feedback (good ones only come from the forum or people I know), and I been in this for more than a year. Go veterans! lol but then again, I know I can step up my game, creating-wise at least.
"Also, I get so few downloads. At least Junglira Rush! has more than 50 downloads..."
Wait, WT****? It does? Last time I saw it, it had around 30.... The only thing that I saw that was close to 50 dl's was my Drag Race 500 which my friend made on my account (he doesn't have ModNation). It was just a straiglt up and down loop and has the most dl's of any of my tracks... yeah noobs. I don't get them either, downloading my crap, not my actual work. Well it is the easiest!
And about the team track thing.... maybe. I tried to do one with dane, but didn't get to and I'm still thinking about doing one with him now that the Holiday competition is over.
Sorry, I miss read the figure, it is around 30, my bad, but still...
on 06-01-2012 12:05 AM
Well yeah, still I GOT MOAR DL'S! U JELLY? lol i wouldn't say that ever. But yeah downloads don't mean anything to me but XP, but the rating does. Having more than or equal to 3 stars after the noobs get to it and after 20 dl's makes a pretty good track. Sometimes, those noobs with rating powers... ಠ▃ಠ + (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻. yeah... that sums it up
on 06-01-2012 08:47 PM
Hey man, im not the best creator, but i saw your request for feeback so i tried out your track.
Concept: I like the concept of the snow- bound city and really liked the ski run. Unfortunately many people wont read this post and so may not know that that was the intention.
Stuff: I think the city section is fun, with all the routes and everything, but, its always nice to see something other then just sides of buildings, so maybe add some areas that are like park sections with trees or maybe a little river running through, just to break it up a bit. The corner shown in the third picture could use maybe one more arrow sign to make it a little clearer where to go. Following the downhill part of the ski run, it may be good to raise up the terrain in front of the buildings behind the moguls, this may give it more of a mountain feel and make it clear your intentions.
I hope that helps!
on 06-01-2012 08:51 PM
on 06-01-2012 08:58 PM
Tecnoboy1 wrote:
Straight from the pictures I can give you a tip, block the backdrop with big buildings to make it look like a big city.
Still, expect a download, i seriously hate the awkwardness of having to download, go to modspot ect.
Ok thanks, I need those sorts of tips!
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