PlayStation®3 General Discussion

[Skykid360]

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fski wrote:

The Method makes some great points but I have to disagree with the spell check part.

A computer spell checker will pass a word like 'witch' as they struggle with context. Human being with solid grasp of English will alway trump computer. Use a human.

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Yes but that is much harder to do when English isn't your first language i think. Words like 'witch' and 'which' could easily be missed (maybe, lol) But having said that i agree that it is the best way (or even a combination of both )

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From what i gathered from the previous thread, the OP is quite young, so i don't think discouraging him from something he obviously enjoys is a good thing (shame on you all )

To the OP, The Method raised some good points there, it would be wise to take that on board. But so did some others, simplicity is the key.

Read any proper professional magazine and take note of there design styles. Keep it simple, and most importantly keep at it, don't be discouraged, hopefully you'll get better at it....but only if you take on board the advice that is being offered.

[Skykid360]

@jessie you spelt Trophy wrong.

It's these sort of things that people are constantly mentioning, lol. You spelt it as Trophie, when it really should be Trophy, if it was more than one (plural) it would then become Trophies. But in that case it is definitely Trophy.

It's that sort of Proof reading that people are talking about, a Spell Checker would have caught that and asked if you meant either of the two i mentioned. But it will only get better with a better knowledge of the English Language, which hopefully should come with time.

But keep at it.

[jesse131]

I´ve had that, but was in another save :/, gettong the good one now and edit it. Is the layout good btw?

[fski]

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jesse131 wrote:

Yes, I agree. I´m actually very happy with all those comments, normally if I ask for feedback there´s no answer.

Anyways, I´ve cretaed this, is that what you all mean?

-Using Arial

-Grey background

-Dark Text

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The layout is better but your punctuation and grammar is poor. I know English isn't your native tongue so you really need a Brit to go over every last paragraph with a fine toothed comb.

[jesse131]

Can you please explain what grammar and punctuation?

And can somebody please help me than with doing the spelling?

[fski]

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jesse131 wrote:
Can you please explain what grammar and punctuation?

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Punctuation - http://www.thefreedictionary.com/punctuation

Grammar - http://www.thefreedictionary.com/grammar

You can PM me your stuff, I'm happy to help when I have the time.

[jesse131]

Thanks , I´ll PM you

[KC-alpha-14]

Hey buddy, I've actually got my own magazine on the internet.. It's a little different to yours..

http://www.myebook.com/PlayrPRO/

Take a look on here and if you ever need any advice just PM me or follow me on @KCalpha or @PlayrPRO

[centrinoduo91]

you should use comic sans

[wendalboy]

its poor mate

just concentrate on school, produce it in your native language or dont bother

if you are really working 24/7 on this you should chill out on it