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'Fight for me' Short film

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14 Jul 2012
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I'm going to post up a short screenplay i wrote a few months back. Comments are welcome.

 

 

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INT. SITTING ROOM - AFTERNOON

Shauna and Jessica sit on the couch painting their nails and talking, they blow to dry the nail varnish.

 

JESSICA

Oh my god i love this colour!

 

SHAUNA

I know its so cute!

 

They both lay back on the couch.

 

JESSICA

So what happened with you and Keith?

 

SHAUNA

I finished things yesterday.

 

Jessica nods her head.

 

JESSICA

I thought you guys were getting on well?

 

SHAUNA

We were, hes a lovely guy. He's just too NICE! I need a man not a boy!

 

Both girls giggle.

 

JESSICA

Too nice = Boring!

 

Shauna Smirks.

 

SHAUNA

I swear a guy could be chatting me up right in front of him and he would just stand there! Cmon like, grow a pair!

 

Both girls giggle again.

 

JESSICA

Oh well, plenty more fish and all that.

 

Shauna give's her a knowing look.

 

JESSICA

I know that look! spill!

 

SHAUNA

Well his name is Jason...

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INT. LEISUREPLEX - AFTERNOON
Keith and Ian play pool at the leisureplex. Ian is messing with the jukebox; Keith is attempting to pot his first ball while Ian is on the black. He again misses his shot.


KEITH
For ***** sake!


Ian returns from the jukebox. The Green Day song 21 Guns fills the speakers.


KEITH (CONT’D)

More Green Day bull*****? Do you ever listen to anything else?


Keith is clearly upset. Ian pots the black into his chosen pocket.


IAN
Whats up with you?


Ian racks up the balls for a second game. Keith sighs.


KEITH
Shauna. She dumped me.


IAN
*****, sorry to hear man.


A guy from another table comes over.


RANDOM GUY
Hey can I borrow the chalk.


Keith hands him the chalk and the guy walks off.


IAN
What did she say?


Keith attempts to pot a ball and again fails.


KEITH
Just that I was a lovely guy, she doesn't want to be in relationship right now, blah blah blah.
He pauses for a moment.


KEITH (CONT’D)
Then the four words a guy never wants to hear. LETS JUST BE FRIENDS!


IAN
Ouch!


KEITH
Yea.


Ian looks around the table.


IAN
Hey wheres the chalk?


Keith points over at the guys at the nearby table.


KEITH
One of those guys over there took it.


IAN
Well can you go get it?


Keith looks over again, he looks nervous.


KEITH
Ah, I need to go to the bathroom. Be right back!


Keith leaves and Ian rolls his eyes as he walks over to get the chalk back.

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INT. KEITHS LIVING ROOM - EVENING
Keith and Ian sit on the couch playing the ps3.


IAN
There's something I need to tell you.


KEITH
Oh?


IAN
I saw Shauna with some guy in Havana’s the other night. They looked pretty cosy.


It takes a moment for this to register with Keith. He pauses the game.


KEITH
Wait. What?


He slams the controller down on the couch.


KEITH (CONT’D)
I knew it, I *****ing knew there was someone else.


Keith is now shaking with Anger.


IAN
What a *****.


KEITH
Shut up! She is the most beautiful girl I've ever seen!


Ian holds his hands up apologetically.


KEITH (CONT’D)
I need to go speak to her.


He gets up and leaves the house. Ian goes back to playing the game.

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EXT. SHAUNA’S HOUSE - EVENING
Keith knocks loudly on Shauna’s door. She answers and seems shocked to see him.


SHAUNA
Keith what are you doing here?


Keith’s anger has dissipated somewhat and he’s close to tears.


KEITH
I heard your meeting someone else now?


She puts her head down slightly.


SHAUNA
Ah, Yea kind of.


Keith huffs slightly.


KEITH
Well I'm not giving up without a fight.


He says without much conviction.


SHAUNA
Keith come on what are you gonna do?


Keith forces a smile.


KEITH
You’ll see. I’ll show you, him, I’ll show everyone!


He turns heel and walks away. Shauna watches him walking down the path and down the street, before going back inside.

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