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I'm going to post up a short screenplay i wrote a few months back. Comments are welcome.
INT. SITTING ROOM - AFTERNOON
Shauna and Jessica sit on the couch painting their nails and talking, they blow to dry the nail varnish.
Oh my god i love this colour!
I know its so cute!
They both lay back on the couch.
So what happened with you and Keith?
I finished things yesterday.
Jessica nods her head.
I thought you guys were getting on well?
We were, hes a lovely guy. He's just too NICE! I need a man not a boy!
Both girls giggle.
Too nice = Boring!
I swear a guy could be chatting me up right in front of him and he would just stand there! Cmon like, grow a pair!
Both girls giggle again.
Oh well, plenty more fish and all that.
Shauna give's her a knowing look.
I know that look! spill!
Well his name is Jason...
INT. LEISUREPLEX - AFTERNOON
Keith and Ian play pool at the leisureplex. Ian is messing with the jukebox; Keith is attempting to pot his first ball while Ian is on the black. He again misses his shot.
For ***** sake!
Ian returns from the jukebox. The Green Day song 21 Guns fills the speakers.
More Green Day bull*****? Do you ever listen to anything else?
Keith is clearly upset. Ian pots the black into his chosen pocket.
Whats up with you?
Ian racks up the balls for a second game. Keith sighs.
Shauna. She dumped me.
*****, sorry to hear man.
A guy from another table comes over.
Hey can I borrow the chalk.
Keith hands him the chalk and the guy walks off.
What did she say?
Keith attempts to pot a ball and again fails.
Just that I was a lovely guy, she doesn't want to be in relationship right now, blah blah blah.
He pauses for a moment.
Then the four words a guy never wants to hear. LETS JUST BE FRIENDS!
Ian looks around the table.
Hey wheres the chalk?
Keith points over at the guys at the nearby table.
One of those guys over there took it.
Well can you go get it?
Keith looks over again, he looks nervous.
Ah, I need to go to the bathroom. Be right back!
Keith leaves and Ian rolls his eyes as he walks over to get the chalk back.
INT. KEITHS LIVING ROOM - EVENING
Keith and Ian sit on the couch playing the ps3.
There's something I need to tell you.
I saw Shauna with some guy in Havana’s the other night. They looked pretty cosy.
It takes a moment for this to register with Keith. He pauses the game.
He slams the controller down on the couch.
I knew it, I *****ing knew there was someone else.
Keith is now shaking with Anger.
What a *****.
Shut up! She is the most beautiful girl I've ever seen!
Ian holds his hands up apologetically.
I need to go speak to her.
He gets up and leaves the house. Ian goes back to playing the game.
EXT. SHAUNA’S HOUSE - EVENING
Keith knocks loudly on Shauna’s door. She answers and seems shocked to see him.
Keith what are you doing here?
Keith’s anger has dissipated somewhat and he’s close to tears.
I heard your meeting someone else now?
She puts her head down slightly.
Ah, Yea kind of.
Keith huffs slightly.
Well I'm not giving up without a fight.
He says without much conviction.
Keith come on what are you gonna do?
Keith forces a smile.
You’ll see. I’ll show you, him, I’ll show everyone!
He turns heel and walks away. Shauna watches him walking down the path and down the street, before going back inside.
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